PURE
PARADISE
Pure
ecstasy
What
have you done to me?
You
have me under your spell
I
feel you, feel your touch
Oh
how I love it so much
You
are all over me
Thrilling
me
Kissing
me
Feeling
me
Caressing
me
Drowning,
drowning
Adonis
Adonis
This
is pure bliss!
©
Teresa Joseph Franklin
26th
August 2013
All
Rights Reserved
Hiya, my first time here and easy to get swept away by this. I like the flow and emotional intensity of your writing. the use of photography also works well on the site, given the tenor of your themes... I'll be back! With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteHiya Scott. thank you for your first time being here on my Blog and your comments too this poem I thoroughly enjoyed writing
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